Tyler R. Martin
Sick in a rut
So tired I just dont give a fuck
Bored and bland
Rest on Sunday as the almighty command
Uncork some wine
Taste the blood of one divine
Rolling a joint
Suck it down cause what’s the point
Broken mirror, white lines
Short dandruff of one divine
And I still don’t give a damn
It’s deamed the blood of holy lamb
Drink it up, drink it down
Toast to Jesus, lift his frown
Sick or stuck?
Either way this is cool as fuck ππ€
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Damn, that’s a poem right thereπ
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Thanks lol…. thanks its supposed to be sick, but stuck might me better π
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Totally up to you my friend π€
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Sorry, I kind of pressed send on that last comment before I meant to.
I’d never make suggestions to try to ‘change’ or ‘improve’ someone else’s work – absolutely not my thing.
But when I see what I think could possibly be a typo, I try to find a way of pointing it out in a humerous way.
All I meant here was actually both words work – and I quite like the different effect both lines then have – but just wouldn’t want it to have been a typo.
Hope that’s OK ππ€
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Actually hope this isn’t weird, and it won’t hurt my feelings if you say no, but wanna swap numbers so we can chat and look at each other’s work and what not, It’d be awesome to connect with another like minded writer?π
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No prob at all!!! Thanks for the suggestion actually ππ
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Feel free to email me:
youlittlecharmer@yahoo.com
Happy to look at your work anytime ππ€
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Awesome π thanks will do
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